tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420575966028612022.post5969942812317666707..comments2023-08-10T06:59:47.650-04:00Comments on Jessica's Gender and Popular Culture Blog: Coke Zero: The Manly Diet Soda.Jessica Magliarohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02266827579211626173noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420575966028612022.post-46029019978833495022019-07-30T08:58:41.031-04:002019-07-30T08:58:41.031-04:0098677004339867700433Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09182008619502475702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420575966028612022.post-12856968643185706112019-01-13T09:29:15.006-05:002019-01-13T09:29:15.006-05:00We have to gather all real information for the you...We have to gather all real information for the youth, we ever update new jobs, result and much more.<br />Recruitment Board In India,Current Jobs in 2019, GOVT Jobs<br />https://www.recruitmentboards.in<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344310884556763101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420575966028612022.post-33043215753230971762018-12-21T06:52:43.937-05:002018-12-21T06:52:43.937-05:00Call 1-315-512-2220,Buy MTP Kit,Buy Tramadol Onlin...Call 1-315-512-2220,Buy MTP Kit,Buy Tramadol Online,Buy Viagra Online at discounted prices and get best deal. Order Now and save more money. <br />https://www.theworldpharmacyrx.ussahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16925921389742037773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420575966028612022.post-1173738993849219152013-06-25T02:22:49.576-04:002013-06-25T02:22:49.576-04:00Hi Jessica!
I am writing an investigative report ...Hi Jessica! <br />I am writing an investigative report about the marketing strategies of Coke Zero, in order to target a male demographic and would like to know where you retrieved one of your print ads from as the source you listed is not working.The advertisement I'm discussing is in your collage and displays a man from the waste to the neck, with focus on his abs. Would be great if you could list a source!<br />Thank you<br />"http://ambienceimagery.smugmug.com/photos/346129990_a9xK8-M.jpg"<br /><br />Anna Thurownoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420575966028612022.post-65405705778956416682010-05-24T12:34:23.057-04:002010-05-24T12:34:23.057-04:00Jess-
I think you chose a great product...like &qu...Jess-<br />I think you chose a great product...like "Diet Coke...for Men" :o)<br />Chris is right about the quote format; however, you don't need the author's name in the parenthetical reference if you use it in the sentence that includes the quote (just page number is fine). The format issue I noticed with your quotes was the use of semi-colons to incorporate the quote into the sentence where two sentences would have been a bit more logical--with the second sentence incorporating the quoted material from the author. <br />I also agree with Chris regarding the unrealistically muscular body-issue for the third paragraph. <br />Overall, nice work!<br />:O)<br />JessieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00882202558089495129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7420575966028612022.post-68954304806772794282010-05-21T12:36:10.072-04:002010-05-21T12:36:10.072-04:00Great job.
Some things I liked:
- Great product c...Great job.<br /><br />Some things I liked:<br />- Great product choice for this analysis; I would have never thought about using Coke Zero for this assignment but the ads work well with the readings.<br />- The analysis regarding the use of color fits especially well here.<br />- As does the use of athletic, muscular men.<br /><br />Some things that might need improving:<br />- The in-text citations might not be done correctly; I think you're supposed to include the author's name in parenthesis with the page number but there may be some rule allowing you to not do that. I defer to Jessie.<br />- You could have maybe tied the use of the unrealistically muscular bodies to the readings more in the third paragraph.CMcKeeverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14975403999492088712noreply@blogger.com